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주제 Energy Source
영문예시 1. Do we have the upcoming alternative energy source in Korea?
2. Are they safe?
한글예시 1. 한국에는 앞으로 대체할 에너지원이 있나요?
2. 그것들은 안전한가요?
작성날짜 2020.04.19 오후 11:45:06
Many R&D antions on the alternative energy source are already progressing in Korea. In former times, wind or sun energy occupied most of the alternative energy. Recently electric and hydrogen energy has been emerging by pure and efficent, environmetal energy. Electric energy is quite popular, but hydrgen energy has significant problems to figure out. Especially a safety problem on hydrgen energy is the most important and difficult problem. Many scientists do their best in lab to solve it.
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첨삭날짜 2020.04.20 오전 9:50:57

Many R&D antions on the alternative energy source are already progressing in Korea. In former times, wind or sun energy occupied most of the alternative energy. Recently electric and hydrogen energy has been emerging by pure and efficent, environmetal energy. Electric energy is quite popular, but hydrgen energy has significant problems to figure out. Especially a safety problem on hydrgen energy is the most important and difficult problem. Many scientists do their best in lab to solve it.

 

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