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주제 Parents & Children
영문예시 1. How are your parents like?
2. Are you close to your parents?
작성날짜 2022.04.06 오후 2:37:06
I respect my mother. She allways ask me to have a good behavior. She is person like giver. And give me great love.
However, I cannot understand my father. My father was in Vietnam War which occured by America. Sometimes I want him to do something for his owen family. But it is too difficult for him. I really want him to get over from deep inside himself war.
My nation and USA just leave them away.
Ask my god how can I close to my father who has a serious trauma. That's it.
Thank for asking me.
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첨삭날짜 2022.04.07 오전 11:23:56
I respect my mother. She always ask me to be good. She is a person likes to give and loves me so much.
However, I cannot understand my father. My father was in Vietnam War which occurred by America. Sometimes I want him to do something for his own family. But it is too difficult for him. I really want him to get over what happened during the war.
My nation and USA just leave them away.
 I pray to God how can I be close to my father who has a serious trauma. That's it.
Thank for asking me.